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Culture is something that effects us every day. Her cultural background is what influences her opinions and actions. (Insert 1 textual example of her cultural background) The protagonist uses her cultural background to move through the story. (Insert 2nd textual example of her cultural background).
Explanation:
OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
FEEDBACK/"FIXES":
<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
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Answer:
A couple things.
Explanation:
The sentence does not use correct capitalization (it's all capitalized), there's no punctuation on it.
Answer: To our Sponsor,
Thank you for your support it was much needed. Our english club is doing much better now that you've provided funds for us to run it correctly. The event was a huge success, and we just wanted to thank you for the certificates and rewards that you have provided for us.
-Thank you,
Secretary of the English Club
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