Dear sir/madam
I amm a regular user of your transportation service and take your buses to travel to and from my office. I am writing to bring to your attention a few critical issues inflicted upon me and other commuters who use your service. I am hoping you would address these issues promptly.
First, during the last couple of weeks, your buses are making recurring delays and this is affecting our arrival in our workplaces on time. To add more grief, a few buses do not arrive at all. A number of times, I had to wait for more than an hour and then hail a taxi to reach my office. Finally, some buses are full when they arrive and cannot take any more passenger from the Victoria Stand. This situation forces me and many other travellers to either take the congested bus and stand all the way in a miserable condition or wait for the next bus. I believe this would reduce people's trust in your service.
True because you have to be able to understand what the authors point is.
Well,
think logically (just hear me out, I didn't mean to say it in a hostile manner)...
You want people to vote for you, so connect with them.
Perhaps think about something you did with your classmates, an event, say something about a connection that you had with everyone there and just make them laugh. Humor always wins.
:)
good luck bud
