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Simora [160]
2 years ago
5

Mariah is writing a short essay about John Steinbeck for her English class. This is her first draft.

English
1 answer:
alukav5142 [94]2 years ago
8 0

The sentence from Mariah's draft that contains needless repetition is the sentence is sentence 9 or "Steinbeck’s name soon became more well-known, and more people knew that he was a great American writer."

<h3>What is needless repetion in writing?</h3>

repetition repetition occur if two or more repetition are included in a text to express the repetition repetition.

<h3>Why should this be avoided?</h3>

In general texts should be repetition, which means only necessary essential ideas should be added and the same idea should not be repeated. Moreover, needless ideas or sentences can make it more difficult for the reader to focus on important details.

<h3>What sentence is an example of this error?</h3>

The sentence 9 "Steinbeck’s name soon became more well-known" is repetitive because it is already stated to be recognized after 1935.

Learn more about repetition in: brainly.com/question/28084537

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