Hello! You've done well so far by adding a simile (stanza 3, line 1) and repetition (stanza 1, beginning of lines 1 and 2). But I'd like to help add some personification to the poem with the first 2 lines since A. it rarely shows up and B. it's one of the most important factors towards a poem when creating something with such detail.
"The future winking at us wishing us good luck
as we wash away worries with ideas of us being stuck"
These two lines offer personification because we give the "future" a human attribute of winking and wishing luck towards a person. Also, Alliteration is included in both these lines which can be seen by the repetition of "w"'s makes it's way in the second half of the first line and the first half of the second line.
I want to add some repetition for the end since you started with repetition at the beginning since it'll bring your ideas together in a much neater way.
"My family still keeps it's traditional pride
My family will push on making one last stride."
You have the repetition in "my family" as you used above, and it explains the ending of the book with the family still being who are they, only they accomplished there goal by making one final action, which is making the move.
I hope these lines help and if you need any more help, feel free to ask!
Answer:Sports figures and celebrities are good role models because they show how important it is to believe in themselves, they demonstrate teamwork, and give their time and help people.
Athletes show they believe in themselves by doing their job even in tough situations. A tough situation the athletes deal with is multiple injuries. Trying to play through injuries would make it difficult for them to do their job. Athletes believe in themselves because they do their job even if they have multiple injuries.
Athletes demonstrate teamwork by working together to complete a goal. Athletes demonstrate teamwork by working together to win a game. Another way athletes show teamwork Is by putting their differences aside to accomplish one common goal. By working together you can complete almost anything.
Athletes do their best to help people. Most athletes give money to churches and other organizations that help people in need. Some people might say that athletes are not good role models because they sometimes act like bad sports during a game.
Explanation:
B. Sequence
There is no specific time listed so its not chronological. No cause and effect relationship, no problem being solved and nothing being compared, therefore, B is the most reasonable answer.
Answer:
The past participle of meet is met (obsolete)
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