The summary of "The Beginnings of the Maasai,” should be revised because: "There are no logical breaks between the ideas in the summary."
<h3>What is a summary?</h3>
A summary is a concise version of the main text. It consists of the key points and none of the verbiage that exists in the text.
The purpose of a summary is to give the reader a quick overview of the contents and direction of the text.
To summarize, collect the key facts and arrange them chronologically and logically without addition any explanations or opinions, while ensuring that there is a logical connection between the ideas presented.
<h3>What is
The Beginnings of the Maasai about?</h3>
The Beginnings of the Maasai speaks to the origins of the Maasai culture.
Oral history suggests that the Maasai originated for the lower parts of the Nile Valley and that they started migrating to the south of Lake Turkana in about 15th century.
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Full Question:
Read the summary of the section of "The Beginnings of the Maasai," where the volcanic eruption and its results are described.
As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.
Why does the summary need to be revised?
