Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
Answer:
Cause and effect
Explanation:
The excerpt structure clearly shows cause and effect relationship as the sentence follows a pattern showing the reason or cause of a certain phenomen and the its effect. With the author highlighting the reason they had to ride segregated buses as being their inability to afford a car. Chronological lists events in order of occurrence. While problem and solution highlights an issue and it is followed up by the cure or remedy.
The correct answer is Hamilton feared that those tasked with creating the new Constitution would oppose reforms that limited their power.
Because in the quote he mentions as one of obstacles the resistance of men, which would be already holding power in establishments and that might have their power threat to be diminished.