Pretty sure it's 2 because the words Congress and Avenue should be capitalised.
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I think you need to add more info and the entire article, but I know what text you are talking about because I have work on it before; therefore, I already read it.
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5.) D. The teaching profession has many advantages and many frustrations; whether or not you should become a teacher is ultimately up to you.
6.) D. Being a teacher has many drawbacks: a low salary, frustration with parents and students, and long hours of work after school has ended.
7.) D. Being a teacher means having many benefits: personal job fulfillment, a strong union, supportive friends and colleagues, and many holidays and breaks off during the school year.
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Answer:
A. the speaker can count on the audience to make the connection.
Explanation:
It wearies by the constant strain after effect, its mock-heroics and allusive periphrasis, and excites distrust by its want of moderation.
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help