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However, while gazing at this love-less boy, the girl made a decision. She would give this boy her love. She did, but you see, she gave the boy her whole heart. That was not because she felt pity for him. Or because she would take it back later on. Or even to make her look great to society. She did it since she was very much aware that he required it, more than she ever would.
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i got into hacking too loll
but yea i have been bullied but i deal wit it and move on.
Correct usage, but there is some incorrect grammar.
In the story, Rainsford tried to take Zaroff out but fails everytime, even though his efforts were futile, Rainsford kept trying to survive the hunt.
You have to keep the tenses consistent. First you used past (tried) then you used present (fails).
Also, this sentence can be made into two; it is a run-on sentence.
Here's my revision: In the story, Rainsford <span>tried </span>to take Zaroff out but <span>failed </span>every time; but even though his efforts were futile, Rainsford kept trying to survive the hunt.
Since both sentences are related, I've linked them with a semicolon.
