Victor assaults his investigations with excitement and, overlooking his public activity and his family far away in Geneva, gains quick ground. Later, Ardently dedicating himself to this work, he ignores everything else; family, companions, studies, and public activity, and becomes progressively pale, desolate, and fixated.
A dependent clause. Because this sentence only give an action, there is no cause for this action unless given said cause.
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Your really still sruggling with this?! wow.
1. trump doesn't care, he is going to demand that they proceed with building of a 3.8 million dollar pipeline.
2.It's more than a pipeline because of all the injustices the indigenous people have faced. the pipeline will ruin the environment on and around the native reserve, it will scare away precious wildlife, and it also continues to ignore the opinions and values of the indigenous people!
