Well, your cover page is very creative, while the original is kind of bland. Yours also shows all of the different traits that the characters have in the story, while the original does not. It could use a bit more color, but otherwise it's pretty good.
Steve jobs believe that his decision to drop out from college and learn calligraphy is what makes an apple an all an all different technology from other. Right after he dropped out from REEDS, he had no idea what he wanted to do. To just learn something fresh, he decided to learn calligraphy.
In the text ransom of red chief Bill and Sam needed a hideout to keep red chief away from the town to kidnap him, although if your wanting the answer based on the movie it's because they bought the mine and found out it was worthless, so they used it as a hiding spot to keep red chief.
