A future event I’m planning is a trip to Paris! I’ve always wanted to go there. So when I get older I’m going to go and maybe I’ll be traveling with my husband or if I’m alone...that’s ok. But I know that I would DEFINITELY go to see the Eiffel Tower. It’s so beautiful! I can’t wait till I get older!
The correct option is B.
“growing in the backyard” is correctly placed. If you were to rearrange the sentence, it wouldn’t make sense. Therefore, making the placement of that statement correct.
The sentence needs to flow and be easy to read for it to have no mistakes and for the statement to be correctly placed so that the sentence,
- flows
- makes logical sense
Hope this helps
-AaronWiseIsBae
Answer:
A counterclaim is a statement that is different from your opponent's claim. A rebuttal is an argument and proving someone wrong.
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
