Question

Rewrite the passage to improve expression

Answer 1

The passage revised for better expression is given as follows:


"Many arts, including:

• literature,
• painting,
• fiction,
• poetry, and
• theater, made the Harlem Renaissance special. However music holds a special place in the history of the period.

The kind of music from the Harlem Renaissance featured a new style of piano playing, the people who went to hear this new jazz sound thought it was a refreshing take on an old sound.

Jazz began to attract white music fans to traditionally African American clubs, where African Americans visited exclusively.

Whites found much in common with their fellow music fans. If the featured pianist played good, then it was good regardless of whether the player was African American or white.

How do you improve expression in literature?

The methods below demonstrate how to enhance expressiveness in writing:

1. Transition from old to new knowledge.
2. Subordinate clauses should be placed with care.
3. Use the active voice.
4. Make use of parallel constructs.
5. Avoid using noun strings.
6. Avoid utilizing noun forms of verbs excessively.
7. Avoid having several negatives.

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