Answer:
I would love to see more descriptive words! Phrases such as, "I was so hungry that I swear I started digesting myself" may be helpful, as you want to keep your reader captivated! Instead of including the lyrics of the song, I suggest just stating that he sang the entire song, as this takes up valuable space. Instead of describing the song, try describing what the narrator feels. Perhaps her heart is "fluttering with joy," and his hair is "swaying like a dove's feathers in flight". Otherwise, I enjoyed this excerpt!
Answer:
I'm pretty sure it's A.
although I can't see the speach.
Explanation:
The words for answer A are words that suggesting that they are working together.
C he writes about Jefferson not Washington or Franklin
Answer:
Explanation:
My positive quality: I am determined and ambitious.
My negative quality: I am rebellious.
The qualities I can improve: I can try to learn how to become more obedient when needed.