It sounds like a "run on" it seems to excisive and stretched out.
3, it’s giving in on the more important details
Time and place or try setting
<em>The correct capitalization is;</em>
A. the Fourth of July
<u>Writers capitalize “fourth” in “Fourth of July” because it's a special date. </u>
First Person Narrator: the point of view comes from the person telling the story.
Third Person<span> Limited. N</span><span>arrator only knows the feelings and thought of one character.</span>
