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Crazy boy [7]
1 year ago
11

Question After viewing the motivational speaker Eric Thomas, share what you took away from is the video. Write at least one para

graph, and remember to reply to two other classmates.
Please check my sentence Here is the video link-https://youtu.be/6vuetQSwFW8
He is talking about success in our life. He is talking about cell phones; he is talking about wasting time and so on. Some of the tips are: We need to give up our cell phone because the time we spend on our cell phone could be used for our success, the time we could be using to be successful; we are using the cell and the cell phone is not bringing our success. Somebody told them they don't do well in math right because they never studied. Somebody said they are not good at writing because they have never written before. Today it's got to go from external to internal. We have to give it everything we have got: no more TV, no more parties, no more playing if we have a 4.0, which is what we need to be doing to study.
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1 answer:
zalisa [80]1 year ago
4 0

Your answer is correct, but it would be nice if you made the text more fluid, using more prepositions to link your sentences, and avoiding repetition of words.

<h3>How to do this?</h3>
  • Reread your answer.
  • Identify sentences that could be joined using prepositions, or commas.
  • Try to make substitutions between nouns and pronouns that are reproved a lot.

Below you can see an example of how your answer can be edited.

<em>In the video, Eric Thomas is talking about success in our life, cell phone use, and time spent on trivial things. These issues are highlighted when Thomas says that we need to give up the cell phone for a while because it makes us spend time that could be used to build our success through study and dedication. Thomas points out that this waste of time makes us not know our potentials. That's because many of us claim that we're not good at math, but don't take the time to study it. The same goes for people who say they are not good at writing, but never take the time to try to write something because they spend their time on super fun activities like cell phones, parties, games and others. Thomas says that we have to dedicate all of us to activities that will promote our success and that implies abandoning certain activities that only distract us.</em>

Learn more about prepositions:

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