Answer:
Ashley wanted a puppy. One day, he talked to his family for hours. At first, they did not believe had the time to care for the puppy. Then, Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family <u>finally</u> agreed.
Explanation:
Temporal (time) transitions are used to move the story forward and show the sequence of events. They indicate the frequency, duration, specific time, or beginning or end of something.
When used at the beginning of the sentence, transition words and phrases should be followed by a comma.
Bolded words are the temporal transitions that can be used to revise the given paragraph, while the underlined word <em>finally</em> is a temporal transition that had already been included.
It would have to be A. They both describe systems or processes that help to map out the sea florr
I believe say that “Simon nodded towards Bruce and told him it was time to call it quits for the day” could be improved with a dialog. Since The narrator is telling in reported speech something that Simon said. Thus being a perfect fit for a dialog. :)
The theme for this story could be that if you work hard enough, you can leave your troubles and problems behind. The theme could also be that if you try too hard to avoid danger , than you might put yourself in more of it.
