I believe it would be:
Dear Ms. Smithers,
Thank you for speaking with me about the position of Accounts Payable Manager. I enjoyed meeting with you and the members of your team, and I am excited to work with such a great team. This job fits my qualifications as I work independently and am a self starter. I feel strongly that I will be a great contributor to your firm and hope that you agree. Thank you for your time and considerations. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
William R. Jones
Answer:
Improving word choice Adding content Correcting errors Altering central ideas.
Explanation:
Chinua Achebe was a Nigerian novelist. He had a title of chieftain of Igbo tribe and wrote novels about its customs. That was portrayed as sophisticated, passed down through generations.
Westerners may mistaken them as ‘primitive and savage’. But Achebe showed Igbo people's rich cultural background through his narrations. Igbo proverbs, ‘the art of conversation", were frequently quoted in his novels.
The non-violent nature of Igbo was demonstrated by events like the peaceful agreement with the Mbaino tribe during a murder in Igbo by a Mbaino man.
The 'paragraph' is not a paragraph, because almost all the sentences are incomplete, choppy, or run-on.
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