C - Pass
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Answer:
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Tips:
Maybe instead of saying "ain't nothing I want more than your love" say "I want nothing more than your love" for a classier and more professional line.
I would reccommend taking out "you're a catipiller, you're becoming a beuatiful butterfly" because in my opinion it almost seems like your belittling the person you love. Try using a different metaphor.
"ill love you to the day that I die" should be "I'll love you till the day that I die" which I might also change because it sounds very similar to a line in the song "Piano Man" by Billy Joel. Just a tip.
When you say "love is all I need, love is all I want" maybe say "your love is all I need, your love is all I want"
Advice:
Try creating stanzas, it will help your poem look more finished.
Compliments:
I love the comparison "like roses you have thorns" and "like a bull I have horns" cause that's basically you admitting that you know neither of you are perfect.
I love your ending, it's very well thought out.
I hope I helped!
Have a lovely day!
Answer:
"Words have energy and power with the ability to help, to heal, to hinder, to hurt, to harm, to humiliate and to humble." the main points from “Letter From Birmingham Jail” by Martin Luther King, Junior are that he was explaining how they pretty much set up the non violent protest and why they chose that specific day to protest for their human rights. they stand up to what was right and what they believed in people do things for a reason they were trying to prove that its not ok to treat people like this and think on this if it was the other way around the white people would hate it right?! so what is the power of word? the power of word is to make a difference in the world in what you believe in no matter how small.
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btw your so pretty <3
Answer:
The answer is A.) People who like to swim set up their business near a public beach.
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