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bearhunter [10]
1 year ago
10

Revise the following thesis statements increasing the Precision.

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Ganezh [65]1 year ago
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The revised thesis is given as follows:

From the movies churned out by Hollywood, foreigners now have a distorted view of American society.

<h3>What are the traits of a good thesis?</h3>

A strong thesis statement is specific, precise, forceful, confident, and demonstrable.

A strong thesis presents readers with an argument that can be debated and supported by evidence.

A weak thesis is simply a declaration of your topic or contains an unarguable fact.

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Her conversation and getting 'interest' in Lennie in this chapter foreshadows her fate for whatever comes in close contact with Lennie seems to die. Moreover, her 'overarching' need to interfere in the matters of the ranch life, her need to be in the company of these men all lead up to the problems that will come in the next scenes.

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John Steinbeck's "Of Mice and Men" revolves around the lives of two men looking for work after the Great Depression. The lives of migrant workers and the conditions that prevail during those times, even though the story occurs within a short time of just 4 days.

In Chapter 4, Curley's wife interrupted the conversation of the men while they were in Crooks' room in the stables. Responding to her question of where Curley might have been, the men replied in a demeaning, derogatory way, which is suggestive of how 'flirty' and 'a bad woman' she was.

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