<span>If one has poor physical health, for example, obesity, the individual may spend more time living a sedentary lifestyle. Those who live with this type of lifestyle spend more time indoors, playing video games, watching tv or playing on their phones. By isolating ones self from social contact there are more incidences of depression, anxiety, and panic disorders. Individuals who regularly go to the gym, grocery store or hang out with friends have shown to have a lesser prevalence rate of mental health disorders as well has lesser physical health issues. A sedentary lifestyle can also lead to numerous other health issues such has heart disease, cardiovascular disease, various types of cancers and lung diseases.</span>
The plural of studio is studios
<span>Suspense is at work; it compels the audience to find out what will happen next.
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The mood of this paragraph is so moody-no pun intended- so dark and mysterious. It almost makes you engrossed into this character's feelings. You feel that bottomless pit in his stomach, you almost hear his hear beating out of his chest. Everything in this gives you almost a hurried pace to it, almost like that feeling you get in the movies when something spectacular is happening but everything is completely silent-not one character talking-only your own interpretation of their thoughts-their feelings.
Like adding twists.....but not too much.....a bit superficial......but only a bit......
Description of nature... surroundings.... emotions....etc.......