The right punctuated sentence is A. Miss Wallace, our babysitter, tried to open the pickle jar.
Answer:
D. The excerpt should be revised because it contains a dependent clause that leaves the writer’s thought unfinished.
Explanation:
The given excerpt needs revision because it is incomplete sentence. The sentence begins with 'because' which represents 'sentence fragments.' Sentence fragments is that incomplete sentence which is disconnected from it's main clause.
The excerpt needs an independent clause to present the complete and finished thoughts of the writer. It is a dependent clause and therefore, does not gives author's finished thoughts. Therefore, option D is correct.
A, the protagonist.
The protagonist does the most deeds or heroic things in the story, or is the person who is mainly talking and doing things in the story.
I would have to say the sentence, "The driver took his eyes off the road" It pulls you and gets the reader wondering what happens next.
