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Ray hesitated, clutching the
small, broken gift in his hands.
He felt ridiculous. "I guess you
don't want my present then" he
asked. "The only thing I want
from you is for you to leave"
Linda said, wiping away her
tears. "You think one present
can make up for all those
missing years?" Ray put the
damaged photo frame down
on a nearby table. "Of course
not. I'm sorry I spoiled your big
day." He paused for a moment, then turned and walked out.
our lives turn upside down this past year forcing us to open our eyes to the inequalities and harsh realities of this world.
This world we call our home but the people in it see it as property.
Property only some people have access too depending on what they see fit.
to see a story about the person so chu see it in another way like how first person chu see the story from the person prospective now chu see others then the main characters
The coach's remarks to the team were upbeat and inspiring; "you can always win if you try your best
