Read the paragraph. Hi Shelby, We are in beautiful Venice! We saw the whole city. We rode in gondolas to see the sites. We saw i
ncredible architecture and artwork. They say the buildings are in danger. The Adriatic Sea is rising. Venice is slowly sinking. I hope they can save it. What is the most obvious fault of this paragraph? A)lack of sentence variety B)lack of organization C)lack of detail D)no topic sentence
The most obvious fault of this paragraph is a lack of sentence variety.
When writing. sentence variety means the variations of the structure and the lenght of the sentences. This is very important to minimize monotony and articulate the ideas.
The writer has to write with such clarity for the reader to understand its ideas and concepts. That is why it is important that the writer has knowledge of grammar and also a good vocabulary to use the correct words in the right places.
