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I believe it sounds perfect just as it is 10/10 and no your grammar is okay and it has a decent flow
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You tell the person who said "maybe he should just get a job" to be nicer, because it is so rude to make fun of or be insensitive about the homless people. You should stop the care and either give them money, or a spare blanket to help them not freeze to death.
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hope that helped :)
the guy comes out on the porch and i believe they had been scared
