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tamaranim1 [39]
3 years ago
13

Does this Intro paragraph sound good or bad?

English
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Yuliya22 [10]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

The first sentence is wonderful!

The rest of the paragraph (especially what I believe is a thesis) looks pretty weak to me. The second sentence is an opinion, which (depending on the assignment) may or not be what you were trying to go for.  Maybe rewrite it a bit, perhaps briefly telling what impact it has on the story. This can lead into the third sentence, which should probably be rewritten to something like:

"Though this quote has many different interpretations, it is about *INSERT YOUR INTERPRETATION HERE*."

The second part, after the comma of that sentence, should be tailored to fit your thesis/claim.

If this is an essay, I suggest you don't use first person ("Me" "I" etc.), unless that is what the assignment asks you to do. I know my teachers usually frown upon using first person in essays though...

Explanation:

nexus9112 [7]3 years ago
4 0

Answer:

great!

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