Answer:
Maybe try showing more fear of the spider, like shaking, sweating, etc.. You could also try dragging out the part before you kill the spider, like when you're walking towards it. When you end the story, you can say something about how the spider was small, probably couldn't hurt you, and other things like that.
Explanation:
Here's an example of this:
I frantically scanned my room for a weapon, I could feel my heart trying to beat out of my chest, my eyes locked on my blue slippers. I grabbed them, my hands were shaking, my knuckles were white, fear and dread bubbled up inside of me. I moved slowly, shaking more and more and I got closer to the 8-legged demon. When the spider was in swinging range, I took a deep breath, I could barely breathe and I was panicking. In my head, I shouted, "I am bigger than that spider; I will kill that spider!" Gripping my blue slippers I swung. I held my slipper there, pressed against the wall, one, two, three. Just then I realized that the spider was probably dead, I quickly dropped the slipper and scrambled to the other side of my room, then I realized...
These are just some ideas, but I hope this helps :) please excuse the not so great paragraph
Poe is a very complex writer who loves to experiment and the poem "The Raven" is a valid proof of Poe's understanding of symbols in universal literature and his wish to explore and have control upon words and rhythm. The repetition of the word 'nevermore' comes to amplify the elegy that mourns the loss of the beloved Lenore. The effects the long vowels produce are shivering the readers' heart. Lord Byron himself experimented the play upon sounds in his poems before. Raven is the metamorphosis of a tragic love, a favourite symbol of death in many pieces of literature from ancient times. The visual contrast of a white bust like a ghost to the dark black raven in a "bleak" December, like in Dickens's "Bleak House", reinforce the tone of mourning a dear person.
In point of rhyme composition, the poem is fully based on Elisabeth Barretts' sophisticated rhythm and rhyme of "Lady's Geraldine Courtship" poem. The rhyme scheme is ABCBBB. The heavy use of alliteration, "doubting dreamy dreams..." plays huge role in the musicality of this beautiful narrative poem of 18 stanzas in which every B line rhymes with the obsessive "nevermore".
Has to be D, trust........
