It would be quite helpful to cite supporting details if we knew the story.
It is a good idea, if you add more dramma it would be awsome!
As of July 2017, the Ark Encounter company has not released how it is doing financially. Mr Ham who owns and operates the company has declined to provide attendance records or how much has been made. There are numerous news articles stating declining visitors and that the Ark Encounter is failing.
<span> A death has just occurred yet she sees signs of new life.
One would expect a much darker scene to set the tone for Mrs. Mallard's grief. However, instead of sorrow, Mrs. Mallard sees her chance for a new life, one free from her husband's. The new life is hers. A life where she gets to make the decisions and choose what she wants without having to think of another person.
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Description or structure/organization those would be either my answers sorry I couldn't provide a more solid answer. all I know is that it for sure is not persuasion. I feel like you are missing an option though.