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Nitella [24]
3 years ago
5

Can someone please fix up all the issues in this essay?

English
1 answer:
MakcuM [25]3 years ago
8 0
Take out "which is the largest country in Africa"
, after Tripoli
, after million
change to "twice as large as Brooklyn"
Take out Later
change "much affect" to "a large affect"
change rebuilt to rebuild
not "the" North Africa
capitalize Red Sea
comma between barren and Rocky
change to ", the most prominent being the Sahara desert"
not mad-made, man-made
highest *point
change to "affect Libya's climate"
comma after winters
take out "unlike NYC"
comma between month and while
change taken over to overpowered
Change "it still continues today" to "he is still in power today.
no comma before since
take out "up" in partnered up
head *of government
take out"meaning the colors"
change events to aspects
"is what Libyans say"-change to "is a phrase common among Libyans"
no semicolon
in this holiday to on this holiday
take out everything in the sport paragraph before "soccer is the most admired *sport* in Libya'
change to "women's clothing rules are as follows:"
see-through


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