<span>I believe the technique in question is "excessive pride in ones self" or the term know as Conceit.
Hope this helps.</span>
<u>O way it handles things on streets</u>
Explanation:
There is a needless ambiguity in this phrase that would just confuse the reader. it is not good prose when you can use just as many words and explain what the problem is but instead just use the word 'things' to describe them.
<u>The sentence begs to understand what exactly it is that the car does not understand on the road or has a difficulty to follow but this is left unanswered in the text of the paragraph.</u>
So this is where the author must re question their word choice for the passage.
Sorry but I would need and request for the poem to be presented so I can help out.
I looked it up online and found the question related to this personal statement. It is the following:
Why does the writer need to revise the personal statement?
A. sentence 1 should include the writer’s first name.
B. sentence 2 should state what the essay prompt was.
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
D. sentence 4 should avoid the extreme opinion.
Answer:
The reason why the writer needs to revise the personal statement is:
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
Explanation:
<u>A personal statement is supposed to be a brief description of oneself in connection to the career one wishes to pursue. It should mention one's experience, education, and strengths in relation to that field. However, mentioning money should be avoided.</u> The personal statement is not the "place" to do so. Instead of sounding ambitious in a good way, talking about "good money" - as the writer did in the passage we are analyzing here - may make one sound shallow.
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