Question

Read the paragraph. What would be the best way to correctly edit the underlined sentence?

Answer 1

Answer:

The best way to correctly edit the underlined sentence is the following one: There are a lot of people working together to create a song, including songwriters, producers, recording artists, and others.

Explanation:

First of all, the verb to be should be plural because the existential phrase is referring to a plural noun, people. Then, you should always include a comma before "including" when followed by a nonrestrictive, nonessential phrase or clause.

Answer 2

Choice D is correct. "There are a lot of people working together to create a song, including songwriters, producers, recording artists, and others."
Hope this helps!