Well I mean the story very likely could take place in the U.S honestly. I didn't find anything distinctive of Dublin, Ireland in it. Culturally, it seems like a very busy, fast paced sort of place that values small business, what with the trolley system being very crowded and the bazaar being pretty popular. Hope this helped.
An outline will help a lot. For example if you were Writing a paper on the French revolution it would look like this.
French Revolution
I. Intro parahgraph
II. Reasons Why the war started
A. the unequal system of taxation
B. The way that the peasants lived a life of poverty while the Nobles
lived a life of luxury just because of their title.
And so on
The correct answer is A: Sheila said excitedly, "I have to tell you about the sights, sounds and smells of Paris!"
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