Answer:
I'd say you did a very fine job! You have a nice balance of description and facts.
The sentence "Well, they aren't that good" needs work, and could be changed, especially the phrase "aren't that good" seems quite passive.
You've used "a lot" repetitively, consider changing to "many" in the conclusion sentence.
Other than that its wonderful! Fix up tiny things and you should be very proud to turn that in.
Answer: Many weapons were made with bronze, including swords, daggers and axes. More advanced weaponry enabled the Sumerians to become a powerful, warring force
I believe the correct answer would be A
The Europeans never wanted a war this bad happen again, andere they taught communism could prevent this
Answer: b. Civilian Conservation Corps (CCC)
Explanation:
The Civilian Conservation Corps was a Great Depression Era project by President F.D. Roosevelt to get young men working. They were paid a small stipend and given accommodation in various camps across the nation to work on Government projects.
When the war broke out Congress shutdown the program in an effort to bolster US army ranks this leaving the camps unoccupied.
With the US now capturing German Prisoners of war, they converted these former camps into POW camps to keep the captured POWs.