Question

Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard English. It was a fine day. A nice breeze was blowing. Birds were making a noise in the tree. Flowers grew by the grass.

Answer 1

It was a beautiful day. A cool breeze was blowing. Birds were singing in the the enormus tree. Bright colored flowers grew by the crisp grass.
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Answer 2

It was a beautiful day with a gentle breeze blowing. Birds were humming in the trees and flowers blossomed from the grass.