can i see the story please? i cant really help unless you show that, i can comment on this when you do with my answer :)
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It should be conversational. People should be able to talk freely with each other.
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C. Emily's sister gave birth to two twins.
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A redundancy is when you say something two times in the same sentence, using different words that express the same, form example in the sentence, it says that Emily´s sister gave birht to two twins, when you are saying that she gave birth to twins you already know that there were two of them, you don´t need to say two twins, that´s a redundancy.
