Answer:
Across the ash,the new ground,/and go forth in the footprints
It means that all the deaths of people get to him/her. Meaning that he/she hates all the deaths that's been happening. <span />
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer: Investment bankers.
Explanation:
<u>Investment bankers</u> are people who work for a financial institution. Their task is to raise capital for entities (corporations, governments). Their responsibilities include underwriting new issues of corporate stocks and bonds and state/local government debt securities. They also assist their clients with mergers and acquisitions, and give them advises regarding investment opportunities. The investment banking has become a field of particular importance in the world of banks.
Mortgage bankers are people (or institutions) that originate mortgages.
Securities dealers are people (or institutions) that primarily focus on security market transactions.
Securities brokers purchase or sell securities on their customer's behalf.
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