Question

Rewrite the following conversation between a teenage boy and his mother so that it sounds natural to you. Make sure that you begin a new paragraph each time the speaker changes.
"I absolutely, positively do not want to go to that commencement ceremony, Mother. Brenda's graduation is of no significance to me. Why, he'll talk on and on about what a great class this is and what hopes he has for their future. It's a drag, Mother," Tommy said. "You must go, Tommy, dear," Mother returned. "Brenda will be all torn up if you don't."

Answer 1

"I really do not want to go to that ceremony, Mom. Brenda's graduation doesn't matter to me. People talk too much. "It's pointless," Tommy said.

"You need to go, Tommy." Mom said. Brenda will be upset if you don't.

Answer 2

Answer:

I don't really want to go to that graduation ceremony, Mom. I don't care about Brenda's graduation at all. He won't stop repeating what a great class they were and that they have a great future to go. It's annoying, Mom. - Tommy said-

You've got to go, Tommy. - Mom said - Brenda will be sad if you don't go.

Explanation:

The original conversation shows the use of more formal vocabulary and structure, in the provided answer some of the words and expressions were changed by more popular ones without going to the full opposite by presenting a totally informal conversation all covered with slang words.

Popular words are considered "natural" in spoken English.