"I'm not sure but for the effectiveness of Local
sports...I think you should include that teenagers find hobbies and that
keeps them busy and they forget about all the risky behaviours and they
learn to work as a team. For the ineffective part, they take
supplements to enhance their sport performances and steroids to build up
muscles faster which is illegal and may be harmful to them, it's also
an example of risky behaviour"
The foremost important issue that has to be fought against is of course HIV which is a sexually transmitted disease. People and most importantly younger people have to be informed about the issue. The practical help could be the use of condoms. It will dramatically cut down the rate of infection.
The second issue that has to be fought against would be gender inequality. This is a social issue and could be fought socially. A better practical option would be the creation of non-profit organization. The organization could promote itself through the social media.
By putting it as a matter-of-fact statement (assuming everything else was action packed) there is a massive shift that creates contrast in the piece and leaves a very concise point to shock/leave the reader with.
