The last two didn't have any change. But most of this sounds good! I wouldn't mention you get angry at people to your employer, though!
If you need more help, private message me! I would be more than happy to help you with those irregular verbs! <3
Answer:
When I was playing baseball with my friends, the new kid on the block showed up. He was super bossy, and super controlling. He came in and ruined the game. Instead of getting mad, I made sure to be friendly with him so we all could finish our baseball game with no conflicts.
The second one is the sentence fragment because it is not a complete sentence. The sentence doesn’t say who or what lost the remote control.
