Question

Write a short, persuasive paragraph of at least one hundred words with the purpose of convincing your teacher not to assign any homework for the evening. Make sure you state your purpose in the first sentence, support your ideas with at least one sentence that contains parallel structure in the body of your paragraph, and end with a concluding sentence.

Answer 1

Teenagers deal with a constant stress from school and ocassionally we need a break. There should be one evening a week where students aren't allowed to receive homework. This can be supported because when you compare a students work before and after a break you will see significant improvement. 

Answer 2

Answer:

Homework shouldn't be assigned for doing it at home. Student's home is a place where they can express theirselves, but also, be free from stress and excess of duty, however, you are putting students into de terrible situation of getting home and not enjoying their safe place, instead, you are turning home into a extension of the school, where homework is the main worry, going against all medical and psychological advices. There's always been recommended that adults don't take their work to home, because that's where they start mixing up both things and stress becomes a health issue. Therefore, if adults are not supposed to take home an extension from their work, why do teenagers have to do so?. There's no doubt that the excess of homework could lead to stress and more issues, consequently, there should be no assignment for this evening.