Question

[2] My interests and goal as a major are to be in communications. I requested to take journalism as one of my classes to have experience in that field of study. It was to my dismay that I was no longer able to take that class for my senior year because of a required class I had to take. Schools traditionally have two goals: (1) to help each student gain personal fulfillment and (2) to help create good citizens. Why, then, are they forcing students to take classes they don’t want to take? Why am I not able to take journalism even though it is fulfilling my personal goals?
What type of evidence does the student use in
this paragraph of the essay?

Answer 1

The evidence used in the paragraph is from a personal view point, but also from a peer point of view. They have seen this not just in their life, but others. This cuts down on the bias. <span />