Most of it sounds pretty good. Maybe reword it like this if you're wanting to switch it up. Like I said, it sounds pretty good as you have it though.
Religion shaped the structure and social caste of the four River Valley Civilizations because the Mesopotamian and Indus River Valley priests held vast amounts of authority and were considered to be head officials of the civilizations' primitive forms of Democracy.
Around 200 AD was the start of the collapse of the roman empire , it finally fell in 476 AD
The difference is that Roosevelt was ready to do more to
solve the problems brought about by the Great Depression while Hoover was more
hesitant to let government intervene.
The programs he launched such as the National Credit Corporation, the
Reconstruction Finance Corporation, and the Emergency Relief and Construction
Act <span>came late to
do any good. Upon assuming office,
Roosevelt quickly launched various programs to solve the problems. In the end, Roosevelt was right in his
approach of Government intervention because at the time, people needed support to uplift their lives.</span>
Is this a multiple choice question?
Radio played a powerful and important role in the Great Depression for Americans, since it provided entertainment and a sense of comfort, especially when FDR would give his "fireside chats".