Idk if this will work but....
It was a strange night... it was warm but there was a evil feeling in the air it was like a rose I guess because they may be beautiful but the thorns hurt. I was walking through the garden and the farther I walked the darker the sky got and the colder it got. The sky didn’t go Black it went red... I started to run in the other direction but I quickly fell face first but something was pulling me back!! I felt nothing around my ankles I looked back and what I saw horrified me... it was a_____ (leave this blank for a mystery or you can fill it with something!)
Answer:
Reading body language is important to field research because It can be used a tool for interpreting ones attitudes or feelings towards someone or something
Answer:
raining hard = raining<u> cats and dogs</u>
walked= <u>strolled</u>
felt cold and wet = <u>could feel the rain droplets as sharp glass pieces hitting her chilled face and numb hands</u> even<u> in the biting cold</u>
worried about being late=<u>what killed her inside</u> was being late at that peculiar time.
Explanation:
It was raining hard as Maria walked down the street. She felt cold and wet and was worried about being late.
It was raining<u> cats and dogs</u> as Maria <u>strolled </u>down the street. She <u>could feel the rain droplets as sharp glass pieces hitting her chilled face and numb hands</u> even<u> in the biting cold</u> but <u>what killed her inside</u> was being late at that peculiar time.
The changed sentence has the same meaning as the original sentence but depicts more feelings of the girl both on the outside and the inside.
A is correct because it isn't saying his or her and also its using correct grammar.
