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I would love to see more descriptive words! Phrases such as, "I was so hungry that I swear I started digesting myself" may be helpful, as you want to keep your reader captivated! Instead of including the lyrics of the song, I suggest just stating that he sang the entire song, as this takes up valuable space. Instead of describing the song, try describing what the narrator feels. Perhaps her heart is "fluttering with joy," and his hair is "swaying like a dove's feathers in flight". Otherwise, I enjoyed this excerpt!
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Spring time, more bees and small insects will be seen because there are actually plants to pollinate, so they could make honey.
Explanation:
1) Present means that is happening now. Past means that something happened in the past. It usually ends in -ed. Past means that something happened in the past.
2) Present: Jennifer is throwing the ball to Crystal. Passed Tense: Jennifer threw the ball to Crystal.. Future tense: Jennifer is going to throw the ball to Crystal.
3) Present: Our boss tells everyone about the rules. Past Tense: Our boss told everyone about the rules. Future Tense: Our boss is going to tell everyone about the rules.
4) Past Tense: I ate dinner at 6:30. Future Tense: I will eat dinner at 6:30. I am eatingt dinner at 6:30.
Apple grows on trees can be rewritten as If a fruit is an apple, then it grows on a tree.