In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
Okinawa was one of the largest single battles in the pacific and also the bloodiest, It would see mass use of Kamikazes, artillery and mass banzai charges, it would ultimately be one of the key arguments against an invasion of Japan.
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David Soslan is king tamar husband 1191-1207
The answer is A i do believe
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I'm not sure about the Great Britain and Us conflict but I do know that the Mexican American war was the war for the possession of Texas? That may be a contrast you may include. I hope this helps.