he does that to show more expression in his stories. it is what all or most writers do to grab the readers attention. a writer doesn't want their readers to fall asleep and then get a bad review. if Edgar gets more and more anxiety in his story it will keep you wondering.
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He thinks they should build up the men to make them feel as if they can do something with themselves and are somebody in this world rather then just tell them to "eat their eggs and go to work".
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Your paragraph is perfect except that you should not capitalize the word "mythology".
