Answer:
I played a card game with my sister and I won!!! I'm getting really good at it. I also went for a walk with here just now and saw a wild baby bunny! It was sooooo cute. People should get out way more often.
Explanation:
I've always been taught that revising involves checking for spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Basically any kind of improvements. Is this one of those questions where you check all that apply? Revising also includes making sure you have stayed on topic and gives you the chance to remove things that may not really apply or add other things that may have been left out. It's where the writer truly polishes everything up.
I hope this helps.
