A friend is going to visit the city where your cousin lives. Your cousin has agreed to show your friend around the city. They ha
ve never met before . Write an email of at least 100 words to your cousin and:
-describe your friend's appearance
-describe your friend's personality
-mention some of your friend's interests
-thank your cousin for agreeing to show your friend around.
USE THE INFORMATION IN THE WRITING FOCUS TO HELP YOU.
Hi cous! I'll tell you abit about her before you meet, so you know what to expect! Thanks again for offering to do this by the way! I owe you big time! Well she is 14, like us, fortunately! Also, I just know you will end up being such amazing friends! She is the sort of person who never forgets your birthday, and always remembers all the things you like, so you never get a gift that you wont like! She's super easy going and easy to get along with, and always makes sure its not awkward, there is never a dull moment when she's around! She makes a great friend, who would make an amazing doctor as she's so caring and always makes sure your alright! One thing you must know is that she is very much into skateboarding, and if you want to learn how to skate, she's the right person to see! She has tanned skin with bright blue eyes and dark brown wavy hair all the way down to her hips, her hair is her pride and joy ahah so make sure you compliment her on it, she will love you immediately if you do! She's got a really friendly, kind smile, and is around 5ft5. So she's a little bit taller than me, so you can picture how she will measure upto you. She is quite slim, but dont let this decive you, she's a beast when it comes to arm wrestling! She has a really cool personality and I cant imagine anyone who wouldnt like her! She has amazing fashion sense, and I always come to her when I go shopping as she knows exactly what looks good! Anyways, thanks so much again for offering to do this, I know how much fun you will have, and how good friends you will be after! Speak soon, bye:)
It would go something along the lines of this - (I'll write the basis, you fill in the gaps)
Hi,
As you know, my friend is coming to your city to have a look around. They will meet you at the train station at 9.00 am, and will be waiting at the front gate. They have ____ hair, _____ eyes, glasses and will be wearing a ____ shirt and a pair of jeans.
I think you two will get on well, just like you, they have a _____ sense of humour, they like to play ____ and listen to ____. They are quite ____ at first, but once you get to know them, they are actually quite ____.
Thank you so much for agreeing to this, and hopefully you will have a new friend too!
Ordering the events this way affect the level of suspense in the story because sequencing the events this way increases the level of suspense.
Explanation:
The story creates suspense by being order in this way because there are key characters that through their actions affect the advancement of the plot, for instance in the first part King Aegeus's actions cause the birth of a hero in Troezen, another example is Ariadne who by giving Theseus a sharp sword, and hid it underneath his cloak, telling him that with it alone could he hope to slay the Minotaur
