OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
FEEDBACK/"FIXES":
<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
Okay I have to go now but I hope what I provided helps.
Dr. Ochoa liked playing the instruments and was going to pursue an optical engineering job before she saw the first woman in space. She worked for NASA and later joined the astronaut program and with three years of training she flew into space.
Answer:
The answer is C.
Explanation:
When answering to this type of question, it is always helpful to identify parts of the sentence. Father (our father) is performing the action, which makes him the subject of the sentence. Bought describes which action is performed, which makes it the predicate. Bycicles (new bycicles) are the direct object; they denote upon what the action is performed. And finally, my sister and me is the indirect object; they refee to someone affected by the performed action.
When pronouns are playing a role of a subject, they are written in nominative, basic form of a personal pronoun (I, you, he, she, it, we, you, they). However, if a pronoun plays a role of an object, direct or indirect, they are used as a object pronoun (me, you, him, her, it, us, you, them). That means:
I found this book.
The book is found by me.
Since here, the pronoun should be used as an indirect object, the correct answer is me.
The rule is obviously unconstitutional. Segregation by race is
contrary to the phrase “All men are created equal” in the U.S Declaration of
Independence and U.S Constitution. Well, the Plessy v. Ferguson just upended
that, which decided that segregation laws are okay as long as there were equal
in quality. The <span>Brown v. Board of Education stated that </span>separate educational facilities are inherently unequal,
almost effectively nulling the racist rule.
