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I'd say you did a very fine job! You have a nice balance of description and facts.
The sentence "Well, they aren't that good" needs work, and could be changed, especially the phrase "aren't that good" seems quite passive.
You've used "a lot" repetitively, consider changing to "many" in the conclusion sentence.
Other than that its wonderful! Fix up tiny things and you should be very proud to turn that in.
I'm pretty sure it's 90 percent.
Let us also remember that many of the problem island states are not just only in the Pacific, we have island states in the Indian Ocean, we have island states in the Caribbean, and the problems are very similar. So, many of the problems that we may talk about for the Pacific, apply equally to the rest of the planet, wherever these island states are. Many of the problems of island states are also the problems of landlocked, small developing countries. So, think of Gambia, in Africa, as an example. Many of the problems that we have in the Pacific are similar to those that are experienced by landlocked countries in Africa.
