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madreJ [45]
3 years ago
9

(1) Renee had been very careful about her costume choice. (2) Anne had told her that there would be a prize for the best costume

, and Renee wanted to win. (3) She’d decided to dress up as a zombie. (4) Her mother had helped with the makeup, and Renee’s sister had found a messy wig for her to wear. (5) Renee felt very confident as she rang the doorbell. (6) Renee felt a furious blush spread across her cheeks. (7) All of her excitement, however, disappeared when the door opened and she saw the other party guests. (8) No one else was wearing a costume. Which revision BEST creates effective and appropriate organization for this story? A) Move sentence 3 to follow sentence 4. B) Move sentence 6 to follow sentence 8. C) Move sentence 7 to follow sentence 5. D) Move sentence 8 to follow sentence 1.
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2 answers:
Katena32 [7]3 years ago
8 0

Answer:

Thee answerr will bee B

Explanation:

I  "B"elieve Thats the answer because i just got it right!

Tanks chu <3

~Graceeelmore1

Degger [83]3 years ago
5 0
The story reads well up through sentence 5, but things get a bit confusing with sentence 6. What makes Renee blush? Is it really in response to her ringing the doorbell? Sentence 7, the answering of the door, should naturally follow sentence 5, the ringing of the bell. So where, then, should sentence 6 go? We learn in sentence 8 that Renee is the only person wearing a costume.  If you consider what it is that makes Renee blush, it stands to reason that sentence 6 should follow sentence 8. Thus, the best answer here is B.
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